[Silent Shadow]

Death sitting at the window
watching my every move
without me knowing
Suicide Buring my mind
scaring my face tearing my soul

Burning within my soul
screaming at me telling me
my pain through thoughts
and memories and poems
and dreams and the world

Bleeding for pain
the demons attacking my very soul
won't stop they scream and claw me
telling me my pain telling me my pain
burning my soul won't stop
i ask and beg for them to stop
but they won't God won't it stop

Beating me making sure
my pain doesn't go away
begging pledding them
to stop but they won't

What must i do to get it
to stop it never does
no matter what its like
u attempt once it always
finds away for u to keep at it
wanting breathing for your soul
won't it ever stop i don't think so
not till your gone from everyone

Death sitting at the window
watching my every move
without me knowing
Suicide Buring my mind
scaring my face tearing my soul
Screaming and breathing for me
Hell longs for me though i long for heaven

Cause this is my bleeding fear
by,Bec

Ps:what the poem is about
going to explain this poem

okay i tried to kill myself 3 times
well i still tend to think of suicide though i don't plan it but i do think about overdosing so this poem somewhat resemables how i feel cause i feel since those 3 attempts that my own personal demons such as past such as cutting suicide getting hte cops claled to school and then future demons that i will have in the future re somewhat attacking my which is myself attacking myself cause i hate myself for what i became which is suicidal excutter chick who tries to hide it all even thouh i think about cutting again or just popping pills

so the poem resemables a fear that i may become that again

[Dude]

i love it, well done, one of the best i have seen on here for a while.

[Ultima Dragoon]

Oooh. Creepy. *shivers*

[Broken]

Kind of repetitive with the buring, souls, and pain. I couldn't get into your mindset, a little background would of been better. With that said this is probably one of your best poems, even though none of them rhyme

[Painfully_Dead]

I like it. I think it's really good. One of the best that I've read in a long time.

[saleri]

that was good but....it's not effective, you know why? because so many people are posting poems that are about the exact same thing and just focus around the same topics, they all seem similar, it gets boring after a while

how about a different type of poem